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Reviews For: One Day of Faith
i-rite-gud 2005-07-01 . chapter 1
I don't think I've ever cried this hard from reading something. I feel really bad for you for having to go through this kind of thing.
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-19 . chapter 1
aw...this is so sad.I'm sorry for the loss. very touching..

~Sorrow~
Aegof 2005-05-19 . chapter 1
I've never had to deal with a friend comitting suicide, or felt the pain that comes with it.

Your writing almost makes me feel like I have. Bravo.
Tainted Tears 2005-05-17 . chapter 1
Wow, beautiful and touching. This sort of writing can only come from the heart, and I embrace you with a friendly sympathy for having your heart throbbing the way it is. I loved the way his advice turned out to be the one thing that could've saved him... Beautiful.

I'm sorry for taking some time for reviewing one of your works; I've been lazy and working on my new story (please read it?).

- Tainted Tears
WiltingBlackRose 2005-05-16 . chapter 1
This really really touched me...I'm so sorry. He must've been an awesome person. Ah I'm about to cry! This is really good...
lyingdreamer 2005-05-16 . chapter 1
Wow. I wish the adjective powerful was more...powerful.

part of me really hates that there are really people that would talk like the two boys in the first class.
BestSkeptic 2005-05-16 . chapter 1
This is powerful, emotional, heartbreaking, inspirational, devastating. The only suggestion I would make would be to take another look at the grammar (I think you misused "then" once). And there's one spot where you sort of alter the tone-- "They didn’t know him! They had no right to call him names, no right to disrespect his memory." You could do without those lines or try to adapt them more to fit with the rest of the piece.
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