Very powerful! It seems to mean more than simply an orange throughout the poem, and it works phenomenally well. I love it. Hope to read more soon...But I just can't right at this moment... (curse school!)

Until my next review,

:-::Bane::-:

I like very much. OK so I am a bit bias because I love oranges but your poem described it perfectly. Don't know much Spanish though but it did look nice. Oh and I like you being a girl too. LOL. Keep 'em coming.