OMG!

this line:

"so i guess all thats left

is to change your colour

to automatic instead of ruby red

on msn and forget about you.."

I did that to the person I like too !

Muaha.

Thats great.

this whole collection of poetry just wows me.

Keep it up ! :)

( and stay strong )

[s-s-softersin]

I'm sad that you said you aren't coming back. I'm also My New Pen Name. . . I sometimes forget who I reviewed under which name. . .

This is amazing. I'm so sorry about whatever problems you have had. . . it seems like we may have had a lot in common, so this really touched me. If you ever want to talk, or if you have any poetry to share, send me an email:

Truly beautiful work.

Good Luck.

ohmygod. this is...me. and that hurts. You write amazing poetry.

"like the lady bird you smashedso you could put down your dietCoca-cola- i'm just always in the wrongplace at the wrong timebut you're so hard to avoid these daysever since you scrawled "mine"across my forehead in magic marker"LOVE. you amazing. end of story.

Stunning.

keep writing, i loves it.

read some of mine sometime, if you have time.

Wow. This entire collection (is that the right word?) was excellent. The entire thing was amazing.

Summer

I like this one. The separation of the words, like in-sane-ly and dis-may-ed (along with all the other embellished words) make this an interesting read.

Summer

Every word of this is written excellently. The imagery is simply amazing.

oh. my. god.

You are amazing. I read this glued to the screen (shivering in 89 degree weather). Your portrait outshines that Mona girl.

very strong emotions in here. touching and heartfelt by the true words of hate, and yet love.

Sorrow

very well written and the ending was quite the surprise...great work!

Sorrow

Wow - I love the way you write, theres something bizarre and vividly expresive about it. I loved the lines:'i search for love in the trashcan'

'if you werent real id make you up'and 'when night rolls inand day rolls out for one second thesecret sheets of moonlight reveala shimmer of vulnerabilitythat sugestsmaybe ...you're the one that needs me.'

again...wow! I wish i could write like you!

i love the metaphors.

moonbeam e

wowwowwow.i'll shut up now.