|Reviews for What I Want|
| Haven of the Shadows 12/27/05 . chapter 1
beautiful. sad. but beautiful.
| Sprkles620 6/3/05 . chapter 1
WOW! Awesome poem. this poem describes exactly how i feel about a guy friend of mine!
| catseyeview 5/31/05 . chapter 1
very beautiful and honest piece! AND A BIG CONGRATS! on getting published...if I can help anytime...feel free to ask if I can
| La Editor 5/22/05 . chapter 1
Lovely! The way the stanzas work is unique and easy to read. All I suggest is to add more... eh, emotion? I dunno, maybe it's me. Probly is, I'm going through a bout of depression, so that's me . Keep writing. Ja ne!kaya
| Dying Rose 5/19/05 . chapter 1
I really like how this poem just flows into each line, especially the last ones. It's beautiful and I have been there before, I can really see myself in this one.
| Yorba Linda 5/19/05 . chapter 1
O_O! Wow, this one is incredibly amazing. I really love how it flows right into the last lines. I could connect with this one also, very good. One of my favorites.
| Pillow Biter 5/18/05 . chapter 1
very meaningful and vulnerable. I enjoyed this and respect it.
| simpleplan13 5/17/05 . chapter 1
i love the format & the ending