beautiful. sad. but beautiful.

WOW! Awesome poem. this poem describes exactly how i feel about a guy friend of mine!

very beautiful and honest piece! AND A BIG CONGRATS! on getting published...if I can help anytime...feel free to ask if I can

Lovely! The way the stanzas work is unique and easy to read. All I suggest is to add more... eh, emotion? I dunno, maybe it's me. Probly is, I'm going through a bout of depression, so that's me . Keep writing. Ja ne!kaya

I really like how this poem just flows into each line, especially the last ones. It's beautiful and I have been there before, I can really see myself in this one.

O_O! Wow, this one is incredibly amazing. I really love how it flows right into the last lines. I could connect with this one also, very good. One of my favorites.

very meaningful and vulnerable. I enjoyed this and respect it.

i love the format & the ending