This is good. love the rhyme and the detail. excellent..it is touching and heartfelt as well. thank you for the review!

~Sorrow~

I love the first 4 stanzas. They draw you in and the rhythem and images work really well. Didn't expect it to end that way though, seems a bit abrubt.

Such firm, good words. I like the "gloom" and "clouds". Also the "casual" and "come". Pleasing sounds for the ear.

I love it. Its my kind of poem.