good i hate the government too everyday they get more strick on where we can go what we can do and the worst thing is war there always sending the poor ive never heard or seen a rich person entering a war bacuse they have the money to send there kids to school they have the money to buy what ever then they give a few measly dollars to the orphanage and call themselves better because they done one good deed when the poor have to strugle just to keep a place to live just to get enough food you just gave me a great idea for another poem

I like the song, but I'm thrown off by the use of 'fags' more because it's used incredibly narrowly, but the rest of it is very good.

You are a very amazing write yourself! Thanks for the reviews! Although I am not an athiest I used to be a christian...but now.. I have changed to Agnostic cause Im not sure of anything anymore... but keep up your writing cause its very impressive... FUCK the government for sure!

Too true, excellent. caliorbust

Sometimes I can't really get into poetry or songs, but I really like yours! I agree too! You make an excellent point.