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| relapse into change 2007-12-17 ch 1,  | abusewow- this is just .. brilliant i loved it, the imagery is amazing |
| backseats on thursdays 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is amazing. |
| crooked on paper 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuse(i’m russia and she’s america- what else would do?) I swear, if it were permitted, I would marry your writing. |
| Akhenaten 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abusewow, this was really good!! I liked your Growl better, but that doesn't mean much since both of them were at, like, god-level already. rock on! |
| stutter something profound 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseyou have such an amazing way with words. you're like . . . a wordsmith. i'm in awe. |
| Fishing For Wizards 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseWe all feel that way... |
| pneumothorax 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. It's almost story-like and is very readable. The part with the spies was good. |
| twenty-second seduction 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuse"(i’m russia and she’s america- what else would do?)" -- how do you think up of these things? |
| Aslan Israel 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWonderful imagery on this. Everything flows so nicely. |
| Nails For Your Crucifix 2005-05-20 ch 1, | abuseLoved the Cold War-ish imagry in the middle of the poem. Wonderful rhyme and rhythm. Great job. |
| SilverSpinner 2005-05-20 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow! I love the rhymishness. Amazing stuff. |
| Joewhatever 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abuse-hugs- i love your writing-- your poetry is so easy to relate to and it's beautifully written. you come up with such great imagery i'm just all...ah! but i loved this so much, so...i'm going to put it on my favorites. lovelovelovelovelovelove. good write. |
| i was a postcard 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abuse"because together, the two of us are like two spies / (i'm russia and she's america- what else would do?)" genius. i loved it all. "when she's here i'm ** up / when she's away, i'm fine i'm fine" hey, one more poem and you'll hit 100! *throws confetti* should i bring cake? |
| Calligrapher of Hearts 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! I like how the flow gets random at points, and the line "she'll eat my crippled heart" is just intense! Wonderful! =oD PS - thanks for your kind review!! |
| in theory 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abuseget the chance to rip me apart/i know if i give her the chance/she’ll eat my crippled heart...Wow. No words, I just read this and was totally entranced by it. *pins to favourites* |