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Reviews For: The Beat of the Storm

December 24th
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful! It's like a poem. This is the first time I have read something this short but so descriptive. =)
maxnotevoltage
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abuseI love the imagery you used in this! It really captures the magic of the scene, and it is extremely intense and believable. (I can honestly say I was at the edge of my seat, hanging on to every word. I loved the fine attention to detail.) Very impressive. Awesome job!! -- J.max (p.s.Thanks for the review - I really appreciated it!)
Lionheart21
2005-05-19
ch 1,
abusewow. i love this. great description. the imagery is just incredible. it makes me feel like i'm with her, dancing in the rain. it's interesting cause it's raining outside right now, hahaha
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