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| December 24th 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! It's like a poem. This is the first time I have read something this short but so descriptive. =) |
| maxnotevoltage 2005-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery you used in this! It really captures the magic of the scene, and it is extremely intense and believable. (I can honestly say I was at the edge of my seat, hanging on to every word. I loved the fine attention to detail.) Very impressive. Awesome job!! -- J.max (p.s.Thanks for the review - I really appreciated it!) |
| Lionheart21 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abusewow. i love this. great description. the imagery is just incredible. it makes me feel like i'm with her, dancing in the rain. it's interesting cause it's raining outside right now, hahaha |