I love it. Very nice.

Short and sweet(or humorous as it is) is the way to go.

I have to say that I want to just laugh out loud, but I don't want to look insane in front of my entire class.

Very nice.

Long review for a short story.

~Write on...

This reminds me of the foreword to one of Ursula K. LeGuin's more arboreal short stories:

"It's all right for the rest of you who climbed down, and developed opposable thumbs, and erect posture, and all that. There's a few of us still up here swinging."

that was incredibly brilliant. I probablly did not interpret it the right way, becuase I didn't find it funny, but your writing style is great.

Much love,Daisy wings

LOL, last line, lol, lol and lols. Very witty, and funny, but it's not the stupid humor that everyone loves so much, it also kind of makes a statement... about how we should be monkeys. *goes to climb a tree*-Akhenaten

That was not funny, you obviously think you're witty, which is almost as annoying as this terribly unfunny story.

Favorites stories list, definitely. This is hilariously ironic... wow. -gives you a cookie- Nothing I would change, nothing I would want changed... amazingly original.

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