Wow this really effected me. It definitly makes me feel regrets for wanting to grow up. I really liked it.

Powerful. Thinking about it... yes, having fun is important. Good job.

~Leeona Trance

This is the very first piece of work that I have read on this site, and so far, this seems to be a great place for self-expression, as your piece demonstrates. I really loved this piece, (i want to call it a poem, is that o.k.?) and i look forward to reading more of your work.