I literally burst into tears after reading this poem. I too have a hidden love as I have already made a couple poems about it.

Lovely poem, encapsulates just how hard it is to reveal your secrets and emotions. Well done.

Best Wishes
Holli x

At first it kinda got to me and i felt sorry for them both but as i read the irony just made it funny in my twisted messed up brain but i still love it.

great job! You're poetry has gotten so good! You're kickin my ** in writing now! *is jealous* Oh well...*sniffles*

Um... You know that when I see the type of ** you're turning out, I find it incredibly difficult to feel even a tiny bit insulted. But yeah, its the effort that counts. Nice try there.

oh, I really like this. I can really relate to parts of this. And the rhyming is wonderful. It's the type of rhyming that works just well enough to add something to the poem and it doesn't distract from the message. And the poem tells a story, which I like. The story has a definite curve to it. And I like how we don't actually know who opened the diary. It's just a summary of what was in it and that it was opened that we know. It made me want to find the diary and look into it myself. I like the world you created, however dark it is. But at the same time it gives hope to future lovers. Very nice.