Oh, I like this. Very meaningful.

i'll try not to be over-critical but...your kidding me right?you write three lines about connection and some french line that half of us here can't read and you expect reviews? dissapointed...Very dissapointed...However, you can redeem yourself if you re-do "footprints"©.

© Copyright 2005 KonekOniko, to make a long story short. If you get caught stealing her work, your screwed.

awesome metaphor

Very amusing peice, again Sumi-chan. =DD I giggled like a mad man after reading this, its so well done and just so silly!XP Lovely, keep it up!

!~* noelle *~!

haha ur funny. at first i was thinking, watz she high on? neway yeah i luv choco too, i'm an addict. italian boyz? i prefer the surfer types haha, and your poem, is it really about venn diagrams? neway intresting, i like the last line. les amour. good job

The poem was short and sweet, and then your footnote was as splendid and amusing as the poem. A delight.