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| Menebar 2005-12-02 ch 3,  | abuseNice chapter. Gamlyn sounds so cute! The chapter was a lil short. A bit unusual for you... So anyways, it was a good chapter and the introduction of more unusual, yet amusing characters was good too. I'll talk to you soon, L8ERZ .:HannaH:. |
| Menebar 2005-08-02 ch 2, | abuseKeeps getting better. Write more please.Can't wait till the next chappie.Hope you're well, luv from.:HannaH:. |
| Skyla Moon 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting - I like how you set it in the middle of a battlefield. Please forgive me for being a grammar nazi, but near the beginning you say "Us men" and it should be "We men." Keep writing! |