|Reviews for Nalani|
| Menebar 12/2/05 . chapter 3
Nice chapter. Gamlyn sounds so cute! The chapter was a lil short. A bit unusual for you... So anyways, it was a good chapter and the introduction of more unusual, yet amusing characters was good too. I'll talk to you soon, L8ERZ .:HannaH:.
| Menebar 8/2/05 . chapter 2
Keeps getting better. Write more 't wait till the next you're well, luv from.:HannaH:.
| Skyla Moon 5/18/05 . chapter 1
Interesting - I like how you set it in the middle of a battlefield. Please forgive me for being a grammar nazi, but near the beginning you say "Us men" and it should be "We men." Keep writing!