Simply beautiful.

Melanie

wow... thats awesome! I would say that I wished I was half as talented as you, but then I sound like I'm fishing for compliments, which I am not... anywhoo, this was super!! eh, i sound weird :P

A short, but lovely poem. I read it thrice, but stopped on the third read because by then it had started to sound a little sad to me. Anyway, great work.

you are a superbly talented writer. it was beautiful. "grasping hold their dreams of a love in fire"- on some sense, it made me think of Frost.