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| lunar_beauty 2005-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sniff* mew? ah sorry- i have a tendancey to make random animal noises!Yes, i think it was v v v v good! a couple of things arn't clear though- not big things, and maybe you did say them but i wasnt paying attention because someones just plonked a chocolate chip cookie infrount of me... i'm sorry... hold on a mo! *eats cookie and returns*I'm sorry- nd i'm sorry for rambling too! Anyway- i really liked this first chapter but is the 'girl' the daughter of the guy, or lover, or relation, or are you going to reveal all later? I'm hooked on this whatever!DAMN THESE INTERNET WRITERS! i cant turn the page and read the next chapter! hurry up and write it, then email me when you do because i can't seem to sign in, so i've just used my pen name.AH! more cookies! these people are desperately trying to fatten me up! THEY'RE GOING TO EAT ME!... or are just trying to be nice... y'know whatever...i'm rambling...luna xfreewebs.com/lunar_beauty(i'm not trying to get people to viset my site- honest!)ˇ |