I was blushing when I read your review (thank you so much, I really appreciate it!), so I decided to return the favour! I think your writing is really good, and I can see great potential here. 17 year old... When I was that age the only stuff I wrote was school papers! So once again, happily continue your writing, and expect me to probably drop you a review once in a while.

awesome ending. Actualy awesome everyhting. this whole thing was just AWESOME. So nice to meet a moulan rouge fan. Amen to that. :-) *adds to favourites*

Personally I love to use the vision and feeling of lips pressing together to "paint a good picture" I believe it conveys alot of emotion. Two souls are bound by a kiss, even if only for a moment. Again a wonderful poem.

the last two lines are a killer...overall very deep, hearfelt to the core. very good.

sad, but i think this proves that true love goes on forever, ne? heartbreaking and yet still beautiful. great job lion-chan.

Memories can hurt so deeply, thay can tear you apart. You're not a bad poet either :)

Well done

Dorien