That was so amazingly cute. Simply, sincere writing. And again, great vocab. Blah. My vocab isn't good. ]:

Well that made me smile! i liked this, coz its random and unique! NICE ~TRW

is too lazy to login. well. i never really doubted you had talent, but today i am affirmed! this, my boy, is pure genius. in truth, the first half of it. wtff d00d you need a beta. >< i spotted a few grammatical errors and some cheesy-pun-intended-esque-but-do-not-fit phrases ;_; but hey on the whole i like this, heehee.you're a rough diamond waiting to be polished, but i think your style is emerging and it's looking fine.

Oh I like this a lot! Put a smile on my face! Your description is excellent and precise. I am bombarded by such variances in smiling decour, lovely.