This one is really awesome. I had to read it a second time to fully understand, but once i did that i loved it! Keep writing!

you should check out some of my poems..i htink we kinda think the same? if thats a good way to put it!

-olivia-

Interesting...One of those poems that make me think. I loved it

Wow. I love how the sentences are so short and powerful. I could really feel this! Nice work.

Nicly done.

A little cnfusing... But it flowed well.

I love this...the concept is intriguing...Keep it up ^_^--pammy-

really nice. i like these lines the best:"The liquid velvet of passionate pleasure

Destroyed all of it.

Your tears look like mine

Taste like mine

Their texture and their colour

But their purpose is different."

eerie, angsty, all the good stuff.--kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann--

another great one. you amaze me with your wonderful writing style.