I like the matter of fact way in which you state things. Great language here with some awesome imagry. I really loved this one, nice job.

i like it -smiles and waves like a good friend- thanks for the review! Love ME!

Interesting...

Wow... Great job. I... can't think of anything to say.

great poem, nice lines right here:"I’m scraping for sanity

But it’s wearing thin

And the taste of your skin

Is more than I can bare

And the shivers engulf me

I’m no longer there."

--kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann--

wow, you can really write poetry. don't ever stop, you have great potential!

Very nice and very powerful too. Great job!!