Oh, amazing! *applauds* simply amazing! It's well written with a variety of words, and it gives a clear picture of what's going on. A simple glimpse into a very complicated life of confusion, blindness, and pain. I love it!

Hm... Took me a minute to figure this one out. It's quite complicated, but it succeeds in telling a powerful story in a short space.

Desperation, loss, sadness, and water imagery (always a plus for me). It's quite a sad story, but as with your other fics, is done well, and it shows similarities in overall style with "Stained Dreams".

You conveyed the emotion without any physical scenario, either - it's quite abstract.

Overall... different, and good.

~Steve~

...God.

You know what's weird? This is exactly the sort of fic I was thinking about earlier. The sort of fic that I think you do really well- ones that are introspective, and focus on feelings/sensations. (Sensations being shown in a certain catgirl fic you did. ^_~) Great stuff, and I'm not just saying that... I was kinda bummed out after coming back from work, and of course, this sort of thing didn't cheer me up, but what it did do was remind me that there's a lot of real suffering and emotion in the world and that my bratty whining pales into comparison.

*nod*

Really good.

Um... would you believe I was crying at this? I love it! Angsty!

PS I'll email you tomorrow morning, mum's kicking me off.

ok this is really confusing and i didnt understand most of it. but the emotion shined through and that at least showed. not, what i would say, is one of your best works, but its ok.