Wow... that's all I can say... just, wow... It's awesome and catchy... I love way it sounds...

ButterfliBri

Another GREAT poem and there is no way I'm not putting you on my faves list - you rock!

great job on this! it's a great poem!

yes i know, pathetic review. i don't know what to say...tuesday

this is really good, despite what you said at the beginning. all the poems i've read of yours are just amazing, and this is no exception. you express what is always on my mind. never give up hope. all my love, shadowed mind

i like this, even if the beginning reminds me of the tunnel in willy wonka...

Wow, that was very interesting. I really liked it!

this is beautiful. you make the words flow so well...and you make it seem so easy! keep it up!

This is so good, it's the best poem i've ever seen, you should definatly write more poems because your really good.

This was really good. I especially liked the line "Paranoia killed and now I'm alone". For some reason that just stands out as being wonderful. I also really liked the ending. It summed things up and at the same time made it sort of loose. Nice job.

Nice flow and rhyming. Great job.

i used to be like this, great poem btw. thanks for reviewing mine. ever since i have gotten out of my depression and gotten happy again i have been kindof giving up on reading angst just incase it makes me hurt again. this is good though. i love it.

I feel the same way. The feeling of crashing. The wanting to give up and the loneliness are very real.

I really like this! Very well written, very individual piece. Good job! QueenVixta

Wow awesome poem! I especially liked the first half, because of the vivid descrition. If this is you being not good, I can't wait to read one of your good poems XD

-Rachel

Omg! It's so nice! And you say mine's nice...I'm interested in Harry Potter too...maybe we can write something together?