hee, fantastic and original concept! I'm working on an original (kinda, heh, it'll get better once it's all explained in later chapters) story about vampy's too. ^.^

I loved the bit about the stitches working their way out. Fabulous. Yea, heh, I could totally tell you've experienced this first hand (well, not chewing on murderers in dark alleyways).

Just left me with one question, just a small thing. Just wondering how Vera found her criminal supper- you put in that the cops were looking for him for weeks, but I was just curious. Like I say, just a small thing that peaked my interest ^.^

Great job ^.^

Wow, I must say, this is original... A vampire with her wisdom teeth removed, lol. Anyway, this was a good story but I think the ending was a little plain. Still, keep up the good work.