this is good. I love the flow and the rhyme. It's true...and so touching to realize that it is.

~Sorrow~

This made me want to pull out my guitar and write a song out of this. Then I remembered how bad I am at the guitar. There is just something very addictive about this poem. Nice job! You're an amazing poet.

You've got kickass talent >.< Everything I've read by you so far is amazing, (and that's alot considering I've only read two so far)

I think this is my favourite, not because it rhymes, but because it's so simple, but complex at the same time.

With that said and sone time to add ya to my fav's! Ja ne~

Oh... so so so so so (etc) nice... I love this one, so... soft, sort of sad and even nostalgic... neat. Nice. nice flow, ending. Well- I like this poem... I like! This is great.

ome of the ryming seemed fouced, but I love the idea and the wording is good. Even if the vocaulary is not. Good one.

With your poems and stories I can really see your...pain...how close you were. You are a really good writer, don't give up.