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| W3DNESDAY 2005-05-18 ch 1,  | abusethe dust and mist and drifting sihouettes beneath silver moonlight are a little eerie. i'm a bit freaked out, if that was ur intention. the last two lines dont flow as well as they could with the rest of the poem, but otherwise Ancient is terrific at painting a lifelike picture in my mind |
| dustytiger 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abusethis is really good, i liked it a lot, good work, thank you for sharing |