I've tried to switch to strawberry.

I just can't find coconut anymore.

i like this. but because its the first thing i've read of yours, i'm not sure if this type of story is what you usually write; this genre is my field (introspective).if you havent written anything else like this then you should, but give your characters a full platform; you dont have to just write a small piece.i really enjoyed it though and will read some of your other work.