This presents a great variety of theme and problems with which to commiserate. Very nice, the rhyming is gentle and not obnoxious and most every sentence contains a meaning of its own that lingers within the mind.

I love the line about being a people pill, very awesome. Starts out kind of iffy, but by the end you had really gotten into it.

I like it. I don't think it's hard to read. I can totally relate to it! Good Job!