I am so retarded not realizing what Sa Moo Rai was heh. I also neglected to mention how hilarious the curse censors are, makes me laugh everytime. But mostly because as soon as I read the sound effects, the actual sound effects play in my head, involuntarily. Great plot, great story, I can't wait to see what adventures Fik finds herself sinking in. And Rsui only had a few lines! I thought "alright new character!" and then "(DONKEY YELP) it's over already!?"

Looking forward to three!

I'm absolutely amazed at your profile, I'm new to Fictionpress, but the number of stories and plots you have are even too much for my imagination. So after a roll of the dice, I just decided to read this one. Hah, omg wowzers. But really, this is by far one of the most unique things I've ever read. The style of the story is phenomenal, very unique, very edgy, very funk. Fik is very well detailed and her personality and actions are easy to visualize. The movement of the story was great too, and I loved the flashback right after the introduction of the thugs. Again, the detail to fighting and movement is superb. But I will say that the detail to the fighting was so incredible, I got lost following along. It's definitely something you have to read sentence by sentence to see.

Love the style and creativity of the entire thing most of all. OPs and EDs? Is there anything this story doesn't have?

You'll have to forgive me as I make my way through your vast collection of things in your profile. Hopefully I'll get a chance to try and look at your other stories.

I'm excited for chapter two!

you write so differently than anyone I've ever met. you really have a great writting style that works wonders for you. write on!!

this is totally an anime. i can just feel it. amazing job, really. you're so creative!!

Ah, I remember reading this story ad then seeing it plagerized. Sorry that I didn't leave a rview ^^; I was busy updating. I also wanted to tell you that your plagerist babyangelgurl6, took down all of their plagerized works so hopefully you can rest a bit easier now, until she tries it again.

um, hi. sorry to bother you. i'd like to bring to your attention that someone is plagraizing your story. the thief's pen name is babyangelgurl6.

your story is pretty neat. i am looking forward to more chapters.

This is a good story. Please continue. PS: Check out my story sometime. It's called Destiny.

Wow, I can clearly see this becoming an anime. Who knows? With the right people, this story could become one.

Obviously, you nailed the comic portion of the story, (and that's about 75 percent of the story right there) and the fighting scenes (if you could call them that) were enjoyable to say the least.

Fik is a character that follows many anime cliches, but she also has her own personality which makes for a very interesting character. And it seems that a second main character has joined the cast this chapter. Yeah, definitely see how this story is the spawn of you watching too much samaurai champloo.

This story may actually be your best one because your style of writing fits the genre of this story so well. This type of story requires someone who can look at all the outside angles (if that made any sense, lol), and you seem to have that kind of vision.

I spotted a few grammar errors (She would never forget her own slap, or her the hateful words of how her mother,). I know they're probably more, but I'm just too exhausted from college to see them. (well, at least I only have a few more weeks, then I'm free! *banner sporting the words 'sophomore year' comes down with confetti* Oh noes!)

Well, I hope you keep writing!

Peace out!

Yo. Sorry I haven't been on in a while. Might not be for another long one, at least where updating is concerned. Well, I actually gave this a good read and I really enjoyed it. It was a good read while being anime but not nessesarily childish. ADD MORE SOON, PLEASE?! LIKE NOW?!Luv ya/ giggity-Yinny

Yo. Sorry I haven't been on in a while. Might not be for another long one, at least where updating is concerned. Well, I actually gave this a good read and I really enjoyed it. It was a good read while being anime but not nessesarily childish. ADD MORE SOON, PLEASE?! LIKE NOW?!Luv ya/ giggity-Yinny

O.O WONDERFUL! *jumps* You absolutely must update this soon! I could envision an anime version of this playing through my mind with every word you spoke. I should have read this sooner. ^.^

HoHO!! Classic, man, classic. Seriously, some of the greatest stuff can happen when you're inspired by too much anime. Seriously. I mean, if this is what comes off from watching too much Samurai Champloo, I must say, I'm very IMPRESSED with this one!! Wowee, this sure is a great one, and it's individualistic from your other stories, as usual. Quite lovely, I must say (speaks in a very british accent, despite the fact that I'm Korean/American) But anyways, this combines the best parts about anime...you know, you got everything pitch-perfect! Heck, I could practically visualize the entire thing flawlessly! Man oh man, I wonder how you do it, Terryll-man. But best of all, I like the original censors. (STEAMBOAT WHISTLE) AWESOME MAN! Totally!! The way that you set up the entire thing was nice. I loved it! Fik Shin is becoming one of my favorite characters (she's second to Yumi, of course. Speaking of Yumi, I think I need to review her story pretty soon...heheh, I don't wanna be stabbed from behind or anything!) Heehee, but the humor was just great. The Geriatric beatdowns??!! Oh my God! That line was simply classic, man. Oh my God! That was (LOUD FROG CROAK) hilarious!! Well, you know the drill Terryll, you right the story, and I give you all the sparkly praise (throws out confetti for everyone) What can I say? The characterizations were wonderful, and of course, Fik Shin definitely has her roguish charms which I (and of course, your other readers) find simply irresistable. She's an unusual type of hero, and quite eccentric, I may add, but that's what makes her all the better! I love the way that she gambles and cheats, but the kickass scene was great, and simply well described. It was just...just...GOD! GREATT! AWESOME! SWETT! Oh my God, Terryll! You're making me speak in monosyllabic sentences!! What are you doing to me!! Are you putting some subliminal thing in your fics that's making me act this way? Haha, no, I'm kidding, I'm just naturally crazy. Ahem, anyways, I always love how you take some creative license and fix up your fics with fancy formatting, which I think is a nice touch to an already great story. It gives the reader a better sense of your story, and it just looks awesome. Oh, and at the very end, it was reminiscent of an actual anime tape that was playing, and oh my gosh, I think I'm babbling right now. That's what happens when I read good fics. ^_^

Heather

(clapping) Brilliant! You know, the world needs more kickass Sa Moo-rai chicks. I loved this first chapter, and I can't wait for more.

Ah, yeah-this definatly came from too much anime viewing. Great stuff. Personally I liked the sound effects over the expletives.(TUGBOAT WHISTLE!!)Good, good stuff all around. I guess its time for me to get off my butt and write Chapter 12 for apperences sake, huh? You're making me look bad, turning out all this good stuff!

Eversince the moment you met me' Terryll-sama you need to press the space bar now and again! Man, you really are (monkeys chatter) crazy. The craziest guy ever! Update soon! And thanks for the review on Battle Yuke Yuke and Scarecrow Kakashi! And guess what? I'm past giving out 100 reviews. This is so (cat screeching) cool.