i liked this one but i didnt if that makes any sense... i think it would have more of an effect if you put in a bit more punctuation possibly... im not really sure... maybe i just dont like the idea of this one... i dont know... your poems are still awesome though so keep up the good writing... throw some bad ones in there too... tee hee-Jess

i've read leviticus once. i thought some of it was kinda funny, especialy "and God spake to..." how can you spake some one?

Oh my gosh! I am speechless right now. Um... WOW! Oh my gosh, that was good! You continue to amaze me with your ability to rhym and actually make sence with your words. This poem, kinda like just drew me in... it was so... I don't know. Just so good! I LOVED the lines, "Read Genesis to Revalation and learn about God's salvation." I could never have come up with that. Excellent work! This really was a great poem. Keep it up, and again I am truly sorry that I'm not able to read all your poetry and comment on them all.