Fascinating myth. I haven't heard of fox people, do direct me to a link abt that k?

I really like your story so far. It would be nice to know more about Takeo though. Also your grammer and spelling mistakes can be a little bit distracting. All in all I would really like to see more of this story.

Good job! keep it up! (i changed my penname, it was mizunekogoddess) cant wait for the next chapter!

~*~*Moonie*~*~

Genki desu ka Melinda-chan? ^-^ Cool story, so far. I don't care which way you go... I prefer continuing story though, tell us later who those men are... Thanks...To all other "kitsune" fans... please see my story "Kitsune Tsubasa" which reached ch. 10 a few days ago! (please don't mind me, Melinda-chan...) ~Pyra

This is really nice. I'm a huge Kitsune fan, so I know quite a bit of the mytholgy and this is really true to it. You have the style here that really does remind one of manga/anime. I really can't wait to see more of this.

I think it should go in the 'Mythology' section. And I don't know why you'd think people aren't reading this, they're just too lazy to review. It's good though, and I want to see how it'll turn out.

-SapphireIris

hey, i like this chapter. it really gets into the details of her grandmother's power. good job! update soon, or else (#_#) please? *_*?

I really like your story. I hope to see more of it soon. As for reviews I've found that if I go and review other people's stories or poems they will come back and review mine. Good luck with the writing. P.S. I think your story is fine in fantasy.

umm isnt this chapter 1? could u please upload chapter 3?

Nice story. Could've been longer, though (don't worry about it; I read longer stories most of the time, like Advocate). Also, if it isn't too much to ask, could you review one of my stories? Please? My name's kinggohansaiyaman28. Use it in the search engin. I'm sorry if this sounds desperate. I just really like reviews!!

That sounded really interesting! Please continue!