wow, that was a really cool poem. it was really original and its cool to get an original idea in here. o like how you made the sos bold in the word sailors. it wad really cool. awesome poem
Beautifully described poem with an excellent flow to its sad finale.
Well Done
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
I think you might enjoy my piece "Ceremony" which speaks of the Ocean or "Turbulance" about a turbulent sea with disasterous consequences. See what you think ^_^