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   Cadience Gemma Topaz 8/11/05 . chapter 6I love the feeling behind it, it's awsome...its good work, just a little scattered |
| citrus scented 7/27/05 . chapter 4 intense, and effective, espeacilly the last line. |
| born-again 6/29/05 . chapter 1 All brilliant, but i particuly like the fisrt, "feeling dizzylost without a drink" has got to be something everyone can relate to at some point! |
| SweetChildOfTheNight 6/25/05 . chapter 6 wow, richtug gut |
| SweetChildOfTheNight 6/25/05 . chapter 3 gefällt mir sehr gut, sehr ausdrucksstark |
| SweetChildOfTheNight 6/25/05 . chapter 1 really nice |
| Sorrowful Dreams 6/22/05 . chapter 6 this is good. once again splendid detail. great work! Sorrow |
| Sorrowful Dreams 6/22/05 . chapter 5 short..but very nice. Great work! Sorrow |
| Sorrowful Dreams 6/22/05 . chapter 4 quite good. i like it. At first love..then gone.. Sorrow |
| Sorrowful Dreams 6/22/05 . chapter 3 this one is quite interesting...almost like a horrow poem Sorrow |
| Sorrowful Dreams 6/22/05 . chapter 2 good detail and description. I love it. this is really good. Sorrow |
| Sorrowful Dreams 6/22/05 . chapter 1 this is good. I love the detail brought into it. awesome job! Sorrow |
| youzi 6/20/05 . chapter 2 a suggestive, intelligent piece..not at all vulgar despite the bold keep writing D |
| secret thoughts revealed 6/12/05 . chapter 6 hi cool stuff even if its a little random but nothing wrong with random |
| ShadowPharoh 6/11/05 . chapter 6 fasntastic! great poem, greater poet! SP |
