seth has cool eyes...i wish one of my eyes was blue..THEN I COULD BE AN AWESOMELY COOL FREAK!! WHO thatd be awesome...lol

wait is this Iona??if so i totally take back that bitchy thing...

Iona strikes me as being a bit...bitchy...

i like solo...she's funny. lol

This is really fabulous. Please update.

Good chapter, i cant remeber if i read it, but i like your main character, her agressiveness is what makes her such a good character. Keep up the good work

I swore I reviewed this story! Oh well, I'm sorry, I guess I was mistaken. ^_^;; You've got a great story here (yes, I read the second chapter too). Please think about updating soon!

Update soon!

Another amazing chapter! I do believe that Solo has spirit. The story had a nice flow. And I am thoroughly anticipating the next chapter.

A very promising story so far. There was only a couple of mistakes that caught my eye. 1. - cobalt, the crescent moon: a silver of gold. Gray clouds - Should 'silver' not be 'sliver'?2. - the dagger and it crumbled into splinters of sand at their feet. - 'their' should be 'his'.

Now I'm off to read the next chapter.

The summary of this story intrigued me, and the content did not disappoint! The plot is super and the dialogue is very clever. I approve!

Good stuff, kind of short, no typos.

Solo felt the soft texture of his cloak touch her cheek and she recognized the kindness in his act. Yet...

“I hope you rot in hell!”- I loved that part. She is a kick ** girl. A few typos, like instead of knight, you put night. Little mistakes i liked it alot. Some of the discriptions where confusing, like dragon flys wings. I liked it though. R&r would be appreciated on my story 2 plz

Ha! I read your original, so that's kinda interesting to me! nice work

"What bad hair..." heh heh...yay! It is good. Seth reminds me of Fire Emblem: Sacred Stones though. x_x not necessarily a bad thing, but...er...nevermind! Update!