Poor Faith! Poor Ken! Gary and that evil woman are CRAPPY BS AND JERKS

This is a good piece because it captures the emotion well, there are a couple of awkward spots but it isn't too disrupting. I liked the ending, Faith's statments about moving on. Nice job

This is pretty good. I like it. You need to stop saying that you can't write. You really can. :)I hope to read more of your stuff soon. Ja ne

O nice one annie. Creative writing?Anyhow, here come ponteh's suggestions!

Paragraph one: 'it had been like this for three week already' I think the 'week' should be pluralized

Wow, that's it! Good job annie! I'm sure your teacher's going to love it (what is it with english teachers and symbolism, anyways?) It's good, not really any flow issues, if you're turning this in I suggest taking it to the writing center and having a teacher look it over- they notice tons of stuff (though personally the peer tutors don't help me much... :P) and you can usually get a good grade if another teacher approves.

There I go again, on and on and on. *headwall* bad ponteh! See ya monday annie-hun! ^_~~Ponteh