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Zetabee 2005-08-31 ch 1,	That's so sad, and scary. It's so freaky when we start to forget certain things about people that were close to us, after we don't see them after a while. Your poem paints a nice picture of the rest of him, and it shows how important it is to you to remember.
crzyderangedauthor 2005-07-30 ch 1,	hey, i like this poem a lot. i got your review too, thank you. this poem is well-written. i enjoyed reading it. it has a lot of feeling in it.
Nyghts Dark Desire 2005-06-25 ch 1,	That's so touching. I love the structre of the poem; the short lines give it the feeling of a breaking heart and mind. It's scary to not be able to remember something or some one. It's one of the scariest things in the world to me. I really liked this piece, great job. ~Dream Forever
NewlyBorn 2005-06-22 ch 1,	wow, u write so much sad stuff...though i suppose it makes sense given your situation. anyways, awesome poem
Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-22 ch 1,	pretty emotional and touching. I like the detail and the time you put into this. great work ~Sorrow~
DailyLatte 2005-06-20 ch 1,	This, like all your other poems, is great. I loved the repetition of the line "I cant remember his scent". It gives the poem more importance.
Avril Duncan 2005-06-19 ch 1,	Aww, I know what that's like. When my koi comes to my house we allways are chilling and cuddling on the couch together, and when he leaves I still smell like him. But after the next day passes it fades away and I can't remember what he smelled like. Although eventually he does come back and I can smell him again. But man, he's a wrestler so... he doesn't always smell great lol --Avril
samantha1990 2005-06-05 ch 1,	Ahh yes the realationships. I rememebr how that was. My ex hm I wish I could remember him. The smell so rich. hm nice work
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-26 ch 1,	wow, this has really touched me and has made me realise that i actually feel the same but well i never thought about the "scent" part of it before, i guess i cant remember that either, really sad poem, but well written x weasel within x
Chase William 2005-05-23 ch 1,	So sad, and so bittersweet. You interwove these two motifs in well. Good job!
Kitty Kat 5 2005-05-20 ch 1,	Wow! This is a great poem! I like the way you seem confused, but innocently. Keep writing!
JuniperSky 2005-05-20 ch 1,	I love it. It expresses things I've felt for so long.
truefire 2005-05-20 ch 1,	i know how you feel. a really good poem. i kept meaning to read some of your stuff, but my house has been chaos as of late. thanks for the review!
Xox-Wings 2005-05-20 ch 1,	Aw that's so sad. That's almost how I feel right now. My boyfriend dumpped my yesterday and I can't forget about gim. I was just wondering but how did you friend die? You don't have to answer it if you don't want too or if it makes you unhappy. Anyway that was a great poem! Plz makes some more soon. ~Brit
Tavana 2005-05-19 ch 1,	I'm the same way, but more with faces and it kills me. I dont keep alot of photo's either. Poem was pretty good, keep it up.

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