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| Written 2006-03-29 ch 1, | my goodness. that was sweet and happy. I kind of liked it? I guess this is telling something about my personality I'd rather keep secret. . . |
| anee 2005-09-23 ch 1, | if you ever feel uppy i think it would be good |
| Remix S.O.S 2005-05-26 ch 1, | aw this is cute..i dont usually like fluffy stories but this one was good. to bad its a one-shot I think this would be an awsome story with bunches of chapters...lol good job ^_^ |
| gonnabefamous 2005-05-21 ch 1, | Cute I like it! Short story wasn't bad. gonnabefamous |
| Sorceress of Light and Dark 2005-05-20 ch 1, | The story is good... But it might be better if they didn't kiss right away. I'm not trying to be critical- I really loved it! Especially because you showed a side of society people prefer to ignore rather than acknowledge. |
| Poisoned-musician 2005-05-20 ch 1, | really good love stroy, i like it and i want to read more, i love this story really romanic it's good!you are a good writer. keep it up i mean it when i say you are an amazing wrtier. please write more of this story i loved it. the characters are so great. oh not to be mean but there were a few spelling mistakes, but ha when your writing fast it happens! you are still a good writer. (i make loads of spelling mistakes).laus if you have time could you look at some of my work i have done storys and poems. |
| Clemtine 2005-05-20 ch 1, | Very nice! It really had my attention for a while...Oftentimes I'd stop after only a few paragraphs. Do write another one! |