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Reviews For: Class Dissention

Written
2006-03-29
ch 1,
my goodness. that was sweet and happy. I kind of liked it? I guess this is telling something about my personality I'd rather keep secret. . .
anee
2005-09-23
ch 1,
if you ever feel uppy i think it would be good
Remix S.O.S
2005-05-26
ch 1,
aw this is cute..i dont usually like fluffy stories but this one was good. to bad its a one-shot I think this would be an awsome story with bunches of chapters...lol good job ^_^
gonnabefamous
2005-05-21
ch 1,
Cute I like it! Short story wasn't bad.

gonnabefamous
Sorceress of Light and Dark
2005-05-20
ch 1,
The story is good... But it might be better if they didn't kiss right away. I'm not trying to be critical- I really loved it! Especially because you showed a side of society people prefer to ignore rather than acknowledge.
Poisoned-musician
2005-05-20
ch 1,
really good love stroy, i like it and i want to read more, i love this story really romanic it's good!you are a good writer. keep it up i mean it when i say you are an amazing wrtier. please write more of this story i loved it. the characters are so great. oh not to be mean but there were a few spelling mistakes, but ha when your writing fast it happens! you are still a good writer. (i make loads of spelling mistakes).laus if you have time could you look at some of my work i have done storys and poems.
Clemtine
2005-05-20
ch 1,
Very nice! It really had my attention for a while...Oftentimes I'd stop after only a few paragraphs. Do write another one!
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