As I said before, you have a way with words and you are turning out to be very talented at writing dark peotry as the previous reviewer stated. Keep it flowing Rachel!

deep writing and slightly passionate. i found that your style of writing to be interesting and it makes the words more powerful. this is a good poem and i think you have a tallent for writing poetry, especially dark, depressing poetry. i like it you are going in my fav list.laus

if you have time please some of my stuff thanks