I love it when you write rhyming poems, do more of those please. :P A silver fairy mesh...that is an awesome description of moonlight. I just had to mention that before anything else.

Anywho, I can definitely relate to this one, sounds rather fitting for one of my characters also. I've used the same idea of the sun shining on some and burning other before in poems, just don't have them posted up here 'cause I want to try and get them published someday, and am paranoid. ^_^()

Beautiful language, as usual. Keep it up. :)

Neat, it flowed really well and the rhyme was a nice touch. My friend is making me read Anne Rice's Vampire Chronicles, so that was the first impression I got- a Child of Darkness, recently Born, grieving the loss of day... There could be other subtle meanings, but that was the foremost in my eyes... It was beautiful.

I love it. It is truly fitting, especially for me.