um...myself, don't care so much for rhyming as a general rule, just to throw that out there...But...I can't seem much to this...granted, I've never read a poem that was a prayer for love...it's kind of sweet, I guess...

I like how this poem sends kind of mixed messages. It's like the speaker is uncertain, and it gets the message across. Wonderful job.

Thanks for the review, by the way. ^^

~Leeona Trance