Wow. Very powerful and straight to the point. I love it.

Yeouch. Dismal. I never expected the daughter to commit suicide. She came from such happy beginnings...for her life to turn upside down like that(to that extent)...seems almost unfathomable. Especially the part about her mother wishing she'd never been born. Really sad.

Beautifully depressing.

Thats deep

Very nice poem. I especially love your last few lines. Cheers! (And by the way, you were right in your analysis of You Beckoned?.)

wow. This is so sad, and yet so beautiful. It describes almost perfectly what makes me want to do what they do. This is wonderful

This is very good. I like the depth, pain, emotion...all of that expressed so nicely in the poem. Don't put the pen down!

P.S. Thankyou for reviewing my poem 'Eternal Love'.

o wow...this sent shivers up my spine when i read this...but this was amazingly good! I really loved how you wrote this. And the ending was really what got me..."but i assure you as i fade/that this will be the last." wow..just...wow..i'm truely almost speechless. I have friends who cut, and this really seemed to put in perspective it all. plz *kw* i loved this.

~britney

I love this poem... wonderful. Thanks for your review... love this poem!

I love this, awesome job!

Hey again.

Creepy, good, but creepy. I really liked it. It's hard to find poetry as good as that on a fansite. Wow, I'm seriously impressed. I hope you write more like it.

Signed,Yes yes, this is good.