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| requiemofparadise 2008-03-26 ch 1,  | abuseI'm jealous! I wish I could write half this well. The title caught my eye, and I expected some weird kind of parody of some kind, but instead I found a poem full of symbolism and carefully, beautifully constructed images...WOW!! There's violence, there's remorse, there's love, there's hope...If you haven't tried taking this pro, it's a definite option! keep it up! :) |
| AbbeyEileen 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abusethis red seablood? a pool of blood? blue tomatoes making linesveins? this line confuses me, but veins like a human vein, tomato as in a tomato vine? in dying rays a dying songeverything is fading and losing hope. I love this line. I don't get the 'my ocean burning' part, but the tomato funeral makes a lot of sense. |
| tiffanishee 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseExcellently Written. |
| Charity F 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abuselovely...descriptive...go the blue tomatoes! personally i find that writing in rhyme or any other structure is laborous (for me anyway) and i admire your talent and ability to twist words around to fit your needs... i suppose you are speaking metaphorically here...very well done! ~Tabitha PS. reivew me! please? i need advice from accomplished and talented writers such as yourself... |
| Princess-anna57 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI can't get over how well you write! So jealous! Fantastic, as always! ^_^ Very cool! Keep writing! Love always, Anna |
| dipti padhi 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseOH I READ YOUR POEMS, YOU ARE A GRAET WRITER.IF YOU DONT MIND I WOULD LIKE TO SUGGEST THAT PUBLISH A BOOK,COMPILINGALL YOUR POEMS, PUBLISH IT ON LULU.COMFROM A FAN OF YOURSDIPTYLULU.COM/DIPTY |