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| ClassicElfRyoko 2005-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseOut of all the ones you have written so far, I must say... this poem is one that I can honestly relate to without hesitation. I love it, and it's written with so much truth. Although... it's hurtful to know that they(fathers) are the way they are, atleast some of them anyway. anyway, love your poems, especially this one, keep writing |
| WiltingBlackRose 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is so full of...emotion. Expressed very well. |
| Opium Hex 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThe emotion in this work is palpable. You use some very original imagery, too, which I really enjoy reading. |
| Nails For Your Crucifix 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseWonderful job. I don't know what it must be like to go through this, but you have my sympahties. |
| tutu, boxshoes girl 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI know you've more than likely heard this before but...I know how you feel. My father's a no good (bleep) lol...he kicked me out of his house because I was trying to make our relationship better. I can really relate to this poem and you're such a good writer I really can't wait to read you're next poem |
| Not Quite Real 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThank you for writing this. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abusewow i know exactly how you feel and you did such a great job expressing it all. yes plath is the ultimate when it comes to writing about this and i love this poem. it's so beautiful in it's tragedy. keep writing :D |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThis really showed your rage and passion so elegantly. I loved it, even if it was from a dark place. I am sorry about your father. He sounds like a dick. Sylvia Plath's "Daddy" is an amazing poem, worth the quote. take care- "you are nothing to me anymore and truly it is such an honor that you feel the same way." *hugs* you are a master poet. really. |
| Open Up My Head Let Me Out 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abusethis is so ** beautiful and deep and i can relate to it on so many levels... thank you for this... really... all my everything,polly |
| Angel Underneath 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is oh so amazing, its full of passion and i can tell you really mean what you say, its amazing love it just ab-so**ing-lutely love it! lol |