one word...AWESOME!lol that was really good and hope to read more of it later on, update soon...and it was sweet about the thing between her and roman!update soon please^_^

aww that was really sweet but very sad..update soon!

o wow... this is good... keep up the good work

That was such a breezy chapter! I really enjoyed reading. So when's Bel seeing her parents? Does she know about them or wonder who they are? Does she miss them or want to see them?Would you please describle Roman more in the next chapter? He sounds to be a nice person.I wait eagerly for your next chapter.

this seems pretty cool

If you're going to set it in another world, you might as well create countries separate and different from this world. I mean, there's a Germany in this alternate universe? I don't know... that kind of confused me.

Also the part when Raymie wondered why anyone would name the happy little girl 'Jezebel'. Why wouldn't they? The Bible exists in your alternate universe too? I'm sorry if this sounds nit-picky, but that kind of bothered me.

Otherwise, it's well written and a good beginning. This will probably turn out to be a really interesting story. Please continue!

~Maddie