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| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2006-12-07 ch 2, | abusevery good so far. i likey. except it says expect a chapter by friday . . . . that was in 2005. WE WANT MORE! (we being me.) dum diddly. DUM! |
| nightmare of you 2005-05-23 ch 2, | abusei LOVE this story its SO good. and its only on the first chapter please hurry and update! |
| An Inside Joke 2005-05-23 ch 2, | abuseTry hitting return twice rather than return shift. I liked your comment about gym teachers- it's true! Your idea seems good, just make sure you revise. |
| nightmare of you 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh. i love it! its like salor moon except this sounds better. |
| An Inside Joke 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWork over your punctuation a bit. I think you should play down the drama a little. |