 Room Without A Door 2005-05-22 . chapter 1Well written. I love the repeat of the "You think you know me" throughout the poem and the end. I can relate totally, i think alote of people can. Nicely done. :D |
 chicastar5 2005-05-21 . chapter 1wow...its like...so much things are hidden,and u wont let the other person,but the other person though the knew...or at least thats how i understand it...good!
Kari~ |
 velvet silhouettes 2005-05-21 . chapter 1I like it, despite the shortness. It would make a nice song. |
 TheDevilsAngel09 2005-05-21 . chapter 1again a good poem. you are a good writer. laura |
 Choke on this 2005-05-21 . chapter 1really defiant - i like the edge of this piece. |