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Reviews For: In the Arms of Sleep

La-rose-de-soleil
2006-02-23
ch 1,
abuseYeah, like the others said, write more. It's really cool, and kinda sad.
Rozovian G
2005-05-30
ch 1,
abuseBravo, man! Seems familiar, somehow. I recall a stargate episode that handled the question 'what is real', when there was the standard stargate world and a somewhat different one... long story short, neither turned out real.

You really got me with this one. I agree with the other reviewer, it'd be cool to read more chapters of this story.

You never used any names. That's a good thing, I suppose, if you were connecting the reader to the character. I can't say anything but that I like it. And you know I can relate to this.

Although the title... Well, yes, but still... Yeah. But that's my opinion.
Phoenyx
2005-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery interesting idea, and well written. Good job. I hope you're planning on writing more, because, frankly, I'd like to read it if you do... :)
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