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| La-rose-de-soleil 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseYeah, like the others said, write more. It's really cool, and kinda sad. |
| Rozovian G 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abuseBravo, man! Seems familiar, somehow. I recall a stargate episode that handled the question 'what is real', when there was the standard stargate world and a somewhat different one... long story short, neither turned out real. You really got me with this one. I agree with the other reviewer, it'd be cool to read more chapters of this story. You never used any names. That's a good thing, I suppose, if you were connecting the reader to the character. I can't say anything but that I like it. And you know I can relate to this. Although the title... Well, yes, but still... Yeah. But that's my opinion. |
| Phoenyx 2005-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery interesting idea, and well written. Good job. I hope you're planning on writing more, because, frankly, I'd like to read it if you do... :) |