I was wondering when you're going to update.

Despite some minor spelling errors,(sorry...i couldnt help notice it...)overall the chapter is awesome! I dont mind the breaks at all, they keep a rhythm within the story, keeping it in motion. The way you describe Raven's emotions creates a personal connection with the reader. Im curious on what mutation she has besides her crimson eyes and who her "parents" are. I'm intrigued with Raven's past and present situatuon and look forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!

GREAT story! VERY drawing ( suckin in) to a person like me! it is cool PLEASE keep writing can't wait to read more!! well bye bye - Tierra!

Hmm... Strange. Why did raven kill debbie? did she want to vote for a president that raven didnt like? oh well, update son!