yes, lovely and very sensous..the imagery was well-done too. i loved especially the references to the orchid (such an exotic and incomprehensible flower)...nice work =D do keep writing!

Rich with symbolism and imagery. What power is woven in these words.

Congratulations, it's official: you, darling, are a genius.

Every image here sends chills over the skin: liquid platinum, sooty horizon, sweat-beaded heels. The raw sensuality slides over you like oil, giving the entire poem a glossy, sunkissed feel. Your portrayal of the lovers is artful, abstract, amazing. Like always, you leave me loving your work and craving more.

I love your style of writing! This poem is oh-so lovely. Wonderfully done!