|Reviews for within|
| liz anya 5/21/05 . chapter 1
Well, it's not the traditional 3-7-5 syllables, so you probably shouldn't have posted this as a haiku. But I like the message it's giving. Good job, although the second line might need a little work.
| Nobody-n-Particular 5/21/05 . chapter 1
Not truly haiku, but I like it a lot. Mysterious and introspective.
| Cloud Burst 5/21/05 . chapter 1
u hav a few grammer mistakes, but its all good, great work