I haven't had time to read it properly, but the themes are remarkable reminiscent of Baudelaire's 'Fleurs du Mal'! I'll keep reading. Thank you!

I of course respect the original better, but the new one is much more entertaining. I like what you did with the stanza about the "virgin preserved." Nice job.

Wow, this was very well-written. I like how certain lines were broken up to keep the rhyme scheme. I love the theme you used, and I thought the details and examples really fit the message of the poem well. Very descriptive and vivid. Good job!

-ShadowNemesis

An amusing modern day parody - still as charming as it was in ye olde English. The narrator can still talk the talk and it looks like not much has changed!

wow that was amazing. just wow

your poem was fantastic! ^_^ luvved it!

SP

sensual in a great way.

I like it! Admittedly, the idea's not yours, but you've used the style of the poem well and the cadence that your poem builds is very well done. Awesome! =)

wow, I really dig your poem. It takes a lot of talent to make the unrelenting male desire to get into a girl's pants sound beautiful. ^_^