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| Prettier in Black and White 2006-06-19 ch 1,  | abusei love the fin. on the ending of poetry. anywhom, this is a good one, the phrase 'i am still weak-kneed from this platonic asphyciatioin" yeah...good |
| faking closure 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely gorgeous. I don't know how you do it, but i'm really glad that you CAN do it. hah. Every word that you write seems to truly come from your heart, or at least thats what it seems like to me. Blah, amazing. I'm gonna go read some more now. :) --Naomi |
| WiltingBlackRose 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abusethis is great! You put so much passion into your poems. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseeverything you write proceeds to just blow me to bits and pieces. this is like a drug. your writing, I keep smoking it to stay alive. (and you really don't mean that much anymore) I love how you repeatedly refer to him as "the boy"- you are great. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abusei love your format and the way you express yourself. this piece here is nothing short of another masterpiece and something very relatable at the moment as well. really you've got talent loads and loads of it. so keep writing :D |
| youzi 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...this is such an impactful piece..very personal too..loved your expression and the parts in the brackets that say so much. Do keep writing =D |
| mercury.love 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is really good. I really love the format. It's just different. Great job, I'm adding you to my favorite authors because I'd love to read more of your writing! |